Looks like Bevie's got a lot of work to do.
Nah, it's all good. She pointed out a bunch of stuff that was messed up/wrong/OOC etc, that I missed. I was just happy I actually finished a story with a plot and stuff I glossed over all the flaws. That's what a beta is for, right?
I think in my attempt to not make one of the characters a Mary Sue I might have tipped her into the spoiled brat/just plain unpleasant catagory.
So, undecipherable it may be awhile yet. But trust me, I think when it's done, it'll be worth it.
We all know about deanwinchester right?
Cause I'm having a really hard time not replying to every entry with "Can I hold you, Dean?" "Can I take all your pain away?"
And the age-old: "Dean? You're so HOT. No, seriously. You ARE. Can I lick you all over?"