Can I persuade someone on my f-list to look over my very late (thanks to Franken-Brody) HP-Angstfest fic? It's approximately 1200 words and I'd like grammar, flow, etc. My prompt: Remus Lupin after he finds out that Sirius has 'betrayed' the Potters, that Pettigrew is 'dead’ Anyone? Anyone? Bueller?